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Many writers have no experience of editing or coaching services and wonder what to expect from professionals working in these areas. So RoseDog invited editors to critique an excerpt from work in our showcase (an excerpt, not a complete manuscript). They were offered a choice of four excerpts — meaning that one excerpt may be reviewed by more than one professional.
Choose an editor and click on "Read sample critique". Line references are linked to the manuscript excerpt so that you understand the editor's comments in context.
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Candy Davis
I provide full-service substantive fiction editing in literary and contemporary mainstream categories that includes extensive marginal notes, an evaluation with in-depth written critique, and instructional materials especially chosen to broaden each author's work. My critique style is designed to help other writers hone not only the manuscript, but also craft in the face of a tough publishing market.
Contact:
Email QuillDriver Literary Services: (541) 942-8329
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Michael Thunder
I work with clients on project development. From story concept to finished project, I support writers finding and expressing their creativity professionally. My clients range from 16 to 85 in age and are writing novels, poetry , memoirs and movie scripts. I received an MFA in Creative Writing from the University of Iowa Writers’ Workshop, have been published in US and England and have over 40 years experience in writing and writing analysis. I live in Durango, Colorado and work nationally and internationally with clients. One of my specialties is an instinct for developing marketable scripts. For additional information and fee schedule check out my Web site (see below).
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Email Web Site Michael Thunder, Published Writers’ Coach—phone 970-247-5327
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Michael Garrett
Stephen King credits me as his first editor in his non-fiction book On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft. I offer fast reliable service at among the lowest rates available for someone with my impressive level of experience. Please visit my website where you'll find answers to all of your questions, including my fee, on one web page without the aggravation of clicking between links or having to contact me directly. You'll also find loads of free advice which I gladly offer to help you find the best people within the industry with which to work. Excellent service doesn't have to cost a fortune. Honesty and integrity are a part of every edit that I perform.
Contact:
Email Web Site P.O. Box 100031, Birmingham, AL 35210
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Aaron Barlow
After life on three continents and in more than three-dozen jobs, including college professor (and Fulbright recipient), editor, copywriter, and reporter, I have settled into running my stores and galleries in Brooklyn, NY and State College, PA—and editing. I work quickly, and work with you, on almost any type of writing project.
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Email Phone: (718) 694-0084 and 814-867-8820 (leave message if necessary)
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Robin Ireland
Ireland has 16 years experience providing proofreading, copy editing, and editing services (mainly nonfiction). Current experience includes: editor of a community newspaper, local food review columnist, and an audio book review columnist for a national trade publication. She was a book reviewer for over four years. In 1999, she received the Washington Press Association's Communicator of Excellence Award for editing.
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Email Web Site Phone: (360) 647-7036 or write to 1200 Sudden Valley, Bellingham, WA 98226 USA
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Marg Gilks
I'm a member of the Editors' Association of Canada and a published writer with ten years' experience in American and Canadian markets. I offer copyediting, line editing, proofreading, mentoring and manuscript evaluation of short and novel-length fiction and nonfiction. My specialties are sf/f and historical fiction, but I've worked on all genres. You'll find me thorough, interactive and affordable.
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Email Scripta Word Services - phone: (519) 442-5693 or fax: (519) 442-6978 or write to: 1 River Lane, Paris, Ontario, N3L 1N9 Canada
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Emma Kaufmann
As a published writer I am familiar with what agents and publishers look for in a manuscript and can spot the mistakes that many first time writers make. I will make sure that after editing you have a finished product that is polished and professional, so that the odds are stacked in your favor when you approach an agent or publisher.
Contact:
Email Web Site
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Anthony Hernandez
My goal is meeting your needs, from simple typo checks to complete book development and research. Being a technical writer taught me how to research, organize, and deliver information, and the same principles apply to fiction and nonfiction books. Creatively, I recently sold my second novel. My technical skill, undying passion, and direct no-nonsense approach make me your ideal choice.
Please feel free to contact me via email at anthonyh@ashlandhome.net. I check my email frequently.
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Email
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Sandra E. Haven
Since 1990 I have provided editing for writers and publishers. From 1990 to 1999, I was editor of Writer’s International Forum which placed in Writer’s Digest’s Top 50 Fiction Markets. My fiction and articles have been published in the United States and Europe—including an article in the “Novel & Short Story Writer’s Market.” Short or novel-length manuscripts are welcomed. See free writing tips at my Web site.
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Email Web Site Bristol Editing Services, P.O. Box 1000, Carlsborg, WA 98324
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Kitsey Canaan
An editor and former English professor, I work with writers in all stages of the writing process, tailoring my services to help you bring your writing to fruition. I specialize in personal narrative and literary fiction, but I welcome all genres. I provide detailed, comprehensive written critiques and follow-up phone consultation through your revision process. Proofreading, editing, and ghostwriting services also available.
Contact:
Email Web Site Phone: (802) 442-5425 or write to Kitsey Canaan, P.O. Box 774, North Bennington, VT 05257 USA
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Gardner Mein
Gardner Mein has been a freelance editor and a college teacher of fiction writing, literature, and composition for the last 15 years. As an editor, his areas of specialization are literary fiction, and nonfiction with a thesis, an issue, or a story in it.
Contact:
Email For brochure and rate sheet: 5921 NW Bernie Drive, Vancouver, WA 98663 or email me. For free consultation: phone (360) 699-6311
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Robin Smith
After slaving away in NYC book publishing for over 20 years, I wised up, escaped from Manhattan and now live in beautiful western North Carolina. I brought my skills with me and offer my expert services in manuscript analysis, developmental editing, and line editing. Please check out my web site for more detailed information and rates.
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Email Web Site Phone: (828) 667-4390 or write to 218 Morgan Cove Road, Candler, NC 29815 USA
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Clive Warner
I offer developmental and flow editing, and also take care of grammar problems if required, for Action-Adventure, Speculative Fiction, Surreal Horror, and General Fiction. First person and action sequences are specialities. Absolute honesty with the writer is my criterion. I have written four novels, the first comes out in June from Barclay Books, with three more well advanced.
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Email Web Site Phone: 01152-8-349-7152 (GMT +6)
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Jae Malone
I have been doing freelance editing since 1990. My services run the gamut from critiquing and proofreading to book doctoring and ghost writing. Grammar and punctuation are basic, but when it comes to grabbing your reader, tone and subtlety make all the difference. My goal is to make your copy both technically perfect and the optimum vehicle for your message.
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Email Web Site Phone: (610) 623-1324 or write to 55 Owen Avenue #5, Lansdowne, PA 19050 USA
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Ken J. Davies
As a published author of stories and articles, Ken J. Davies has, under the trade name of Hawkeye Studios, provided writing and editing services to individuals, businesses and institutions for fifteen years. Ken, who is also editor of Millennium Shift on-line magazine, believes that the craft of writing, at its best, is practiced as both an art and a science.
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Email Web Site Phone: (403) 295-3556
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Dennis Latham
Dennis Latham/The Line Editor: I have three published novels: The Bad Season, Michael In Hell, Driving With Ace, and fifteen published short stories and articles. I'm an active member of the HWA (Horror Writers Association). Floater is in Random Acts of Weirdness,a short story collection of top horror writers released by Catalyst Press in December 2002. Psychosis, a short story, has just been published by Far Sector and Clocktower on fictionwise.com.
I'm sympathetic to writers, but a brutal editor. I've had over 1000 rejections myself (see Byline Magazine/December 1999/ Twice A King), and I love to give writers shortcuts I have learned the hard way. I guarantee I can improve your writing.
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Email Web Site Phone: (888) 251-3979
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Sandy Tritt
I am the author of two novels and the founder and CEO of Inspiration for Writers, a critiquing and editing service. I believe criticism should always be constructive and given with respect and compassion - surely, anyone who has devoted months of his life creating a work of art deserves no less.
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Email Web Site
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Danielle Thorne
Danielle Thorne is an editor and reviewer with Bookideas.com. She also has reviewed family film for Family Wonder, Inc., as well as Internet sites and music. A published freelance and fiction writer, Ms. Thorne created A Grain of Salt to give writers valuable input regarding the content of their material. She also writes publicity reviews for authors, published in either print or electronic form.
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Email Web Site
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If you are a professional writing coach or editor and wish to feature a sample of your work in this series, please email us at rosedog@rosedogbooks.com
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